tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8741294189617693364.post4920501192019022437..comments2017-11-03T17:12:20.007-04:00Comments on Ember in Wrilogonzia: Episode 16b- Fortress Twig Continued ...Willow Drakehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01106489265767821723noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8741294189617693364.post-52957913326074611402015-01-08T10:58:53.374-05:002015-01-08T10:58:53.374-05:00Thanks Anna. That's excellent advice. I didn&#...Thanks Anna. That's excellent advice. I didn't even realize how much I used those. I'm going to edit.Willow Drakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01106489265767821723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8741294189617693364.post-50223893326958360942015-01-08T01:17:19.666-05:002015-01-08T01:17:19.666-05:00Oooh - Awesome! The suspense is killing me. Not to...Oooh - Awesome! The suspense is killing me. Not to the critical part - you should always avoid any form of 'got'. 'had' too if at all possible. That's all I noticed this time around. Wonderful story.Anna L. Wallshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00144458783329501190noreply@blogger.com